tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post116196001751428532..comments2023-08-16T17:24:41.640+08:00Comments on ufukhati: SINGING WITH A FISH [ 11 ]Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1163402325941394022006-11-13T15:18:00.000+08:002006-11-13T15:18:00.000+08:00salam pak darma .. ..ermp, insyaAllah akan terus m...salam pak darma .. ..<BR/><BR/>ermp, insyaAllah akan terus melangkah di dlm dunia puisi .. .. seakan akan sudah menjadi darah daging setelah bertahun tak mampu dihentikan dari aliran darah .. .. ;-) .. ..<BR/><BR/>emrp, sajak baru itu pasti akan dinikmati .. .. ahah .. ..jiwa meranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14565233124944790219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1163167690779609172006-11-10T22:08:00.000+08:002006-11-10T22:08:00.000+08:00jiwa merana,bagus sekali jika kita dapat bercakap-...jiwa merana,<BR/><BR/>bagus sekali jika kita dapat bercakap-cakap begini.<BR/><BR/>baca juga sajak yang baru saya poskan di atas (walaupun sajak itu sajak lama.)<BR/><BR/>suka saya mendapat sahabat baru. rajin-rajinlah tulis sajak!ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1163152944747715672006-11-10T18:02:00.000+08:002006-11-10T18:02:00.000+08:00salam pak darma .. ..Jiwa juga tak bisa berhenti d...salam pak darma .. ..<BR/><BR/>Jiwa juga tak bisa berhenti dari merangkai kata kata menjadikan ia sebentuk puisi yg berkisah .. .. ia memberikan keindahan yg tersendiri kpd hati dan jiwa .. .. ahah .. .. ;-) .. ..<BR/><BR/>ermp, meskipun baru saja berada di dlm fasa mempelajari ilmunya .. ..jiwa meranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14565233124944790219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1163152666464203862006-11-10T17:57:00.000+08:002006-11-10T17:57:00.000+08:00sdr. jiwa merana,terima kasih kerana sudi singgah ...sdr. jiwa merana,<BR/><BR/>terima kasih kerana sudi singgah di sini.<BR/><BR/>mari kita memberi makna kepada hidup ini : dengan cara paling positif, konstraktif dan optimis.<BR/><BR/>saya suka sajak, apa nak buat?ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1163142219358463772006-11-10T15:03:00.000+08:002006-11-10T15:03:00.000+08:00salam pak darma .. ..".. .. waktu melunturkan hidu...salam pak darma .. ..<BR/><BR/>".. .. waktu melunturkan hidup indah .. ..<BR/> apabila kita tak bisa menetapkan<BR/>.. .. makna di dalam perjalanannya .. .."<BR/><BR/>ermp, puisi bapak memberikan erti yg alami .. .. ;-) .. ..jiwa meranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14565233124944790219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1163087184365124422006-11-09T23:46:00.000+08:002006-11-09T23:46:00.000+08:00Puan Shima,I agree.Thank you for your help.Puan Shima,<BR/><BR/>I agree.<BR/>Thank you for your help.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162906083832025922006-11-07T21:28:00.000+08:002006-11-07T21:28:00.000+08:00plus ultra,Latif is a very famous poet. I like his...plus ultra,<BR/><BR/>Latif is a very famous poet. I like his poems. You must remember "Sungai Mekong".<BR/><BR/>Thank you plus.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162507785929977892006-11-03T06:49:00.000+08:002006-11-03T06:49:00.000+08:00Your poetry reminds me of the art and poetry of La...Your poetry reminds me of the art and poetry of Latif MohidinPlus Ultrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735827112800682222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162389905759502432006-11-01T22:05:00.000+08:002006-11-01T22:05:00.000+08:00margie,From moment to moment words flowand poetry ...margie,<BR/><BR/>From moment to moment words <BR/>flow<BR/>and poetry is born.<BR/><BR/>Your words are very optimistic.<BR/><BR/>Thanks, margie.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162388611475375062006-11-01T21:43:00.000+08:002006-11-01T21:43:00.000+08:00kai,I always appreciate your poems ANDyour beautif...kai,<BR/><BR/>I always appreciate your poems <BR/>AND<BR/>your beautiful butterfly!<BR/><BR/>Both come from you heart <BR/>AND<BR/>let them "fly" freely.<BR/><BR/>Thank you, kai.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162363928664221362006-11-01T14:52:00.000+08:002006-11-01T14:52:00.000+08:00Very nice!I like this poem very much!Margie:)Very nice!<BR/>I like this poem very much!<BR/><BR/>Margie:)Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162358512436256852006-11-01T13:21:00.000+08:002006-11-01T13:21:00.000+08:00thank you.did u like my butterfly flying on my blo...thank you.<BR/><BR/>did u like my butterfly flying on my blog?Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162356440888986632006-11-01T12:47:00.000+08:002006-11-01T12:47:00.000+08:00starry,Thank you, starry.You're still around, I gu...starry,<BR/><BR/>Thank you, starry.<BR/><BR/>You're still around, I guess. Our friend Dumbdodi is going to take a pause for a while.<BR/><BR/>Happy day!ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162356073026294472006-11-01T12:41:00.000+08:002006-11-01T12:41:00.000+08:00dumbdodi alias Radhika,I'll miss you a lot. Thanks...dumbdodi alias Radhika,<BR/><BR/>I'll miss you a lot. <BR/><BR/>Thanks for your very kind messages and memorable rapports.<BR/><BR/>Happy living and never say goodbye!ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162341311417649112006-11-01T08:35:00.000+08:002006-11-01T08:35:00.000+08:00love this poem ufukhati.love this poem ufukhati.starryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00250437477875291892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162317612474090732006-11-01T02:00:00.000+08:002006-11-01T02:00:00.000+08:00Thats a winter poem isn't...beautiful like always....Thats a winter poem isn't...beautiful like always...thank you for your visit...I hope to see you around when I come back...its hard to say good bye but its better than being away without notice :-)<BR/>Lots of love and wishes to you Ufukhati- Heart of the horizondumbdodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17058309506504602465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162295609565801842006-10-31T19:53:00.000+08:002006-10-31T19:53:00.000+08:00junita,I love butterflies(and the moths too).Sad t...junita,<BR/><BR/>I love butterflies<BR/>(and the moths too).<BR/>Sad to see butterflies<BR/>are being pinned to death!<BR/><BR/>Is it natural?ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162295537193873532006-10-31T19:52:00.000+08:002006-10-31T19:52:00.000+08:00junita,I love butterflies(and the moths too).Sad t...junita,<BR/><BR/>I love butterflies<BR/>(and the moths too).<BR/>Sad to see butterflies<BR/>are being pinned to death!<BR/><BR/>Is it natural?ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162294896797268502006-10-31T19:41:00.000+08:002006-10-31T19:41:00.000+08:00sdr.scarlet,Oh, gembiranya hati saya membaca reaks...sdr.scarlet,<BR/><BR/>Oh, gembiranya hati saya membaca reaksi sdr.itu. Saya cukup senang hati jika sdr.sudi melakukannya. Seperti selalu saya katakan, saya sentiasa hendak belajar.<BR/><BR/>Cuma sdr.scarlet, saya tak mampu hendak memberi apa-apa ganjaran atas "kerja" sdr. itu. Jika sdr. rasa senang hendak melakukanya, sayalah orang yang sangat berbahagia menerima budi sdr.itu.<BR/><BR/>Nota : Saya (Insya Allah)akan berada di sekitar RHB Complex Bangi, Jalan Institusi, Bandar Baru Bangi (pagi) pada 6 NOV. 2006.<BR/><BR/>Wassalam.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162294091433208092006-10-31T19:28:00.000+08:002006-10-31T19:28:00.000+08:00Sri Diah,Saya pun memohon banyak-banyak maaf. Masa...Sri Diah,<BR/><BR/>Saya pun memohon banyak-banyak maaf. Masa jumpa di kantor Sinar Harian dulu tak sempat berbincang panjang kerana kesuntukan masa. <BR/><BR/>Apa pun, penerangan Sri tentang kreativiti menulis novel amat menarik perhatian saya.Saya dapat ilmu yang banyak.<BR/><BR/>Selamat menulis.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162271917396204462006-10-31T13:18:00.000+08:002006-10-31T13:18:00.000+08:00Yea..butterfly...imagine the life cycle..then it d...Yea..butterfly...imagine the life cycle..then it dies...<BR/>And the cycle repeat itself...Monster Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17640040418912071420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162235907146801662006-10-31T03:18:00.000+08:002006-10-31T03:18:00.000+08:00pak Darma,terima kasih atas penerangan tuan itu da...pak Darma,<BR/><BR/>terima kasih atas penerangan tuan itu dan saya sangat bersetuju tentang adanya pelbagai alternatif kepada cara terjemahan dan pemilihan perkataan. saya ni macam orang mengantuk disorongkan bantal lagaknya ni. saya sebenarnya memang teringin nak menterjemah salah sebuah sajak tuan. sajak itu memang sudah pun tuan terjemahkan ke bahasa Inggeris dan ada tersiar dalam blog ini. saya tidaklah berniat nak membanding-bandingkan hasil terjemahan apatah lagi nak menunjuk ajar tuan. tapi dalam banyak2 sajak tuan yang disiarkan dalam blog ini, ada beberapa yang sangat saya minati lebih daripada yang lain; seperti Langit (2) dan Pintu Kalbu. bolehkah saya cuba terjemahkannya menurut cara saya, tuan?Herohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15403434276790358516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162131408160207902006-10-29T22:16:00.000+08:002006-10-29T22:16:00.000+08:00Selamat hari raya Aidilfitri. Semoga kita diberi k...Selamat hari raya Aidilfitri. Semoga kita diberi kesempatan merasai Ramadan dan Syawal di tahun mendatang - Sri Diah.Sri Diahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10140906637804227175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162096013484653132006-10-29T12:26:00.000+08:002006-10-29T12:26:00.000+08:00sdr.scarlet,Terima kasih atas sambutan sdr. itu. S...sdr.scarlet,<BR/><BR/>Terima kasih atas sambutan sdr. itu. <BR/><BR/>Seperti saya maklumkan kepada sdr.dahulu, saya cuma "melepas resah" dan saya tak tahu pun ilmu terjemahan. Mungkin saya sudah lewat untuk belajar ilmu terjemahan. Bagi saya tak mengapa.<BR/><BR/>Puisi saya yang sudah diterbitkan boleh dikatakan "banyak". Untuk menziarahi "mereka" itu, saya pakaikan mereka "baju" lain (terjemahan).Itu sahaja. <BR/><BR/>Masalah saya, sukar bagi saya mencari kata-kata Inggeris yang sepadan dengan maksud asal dalam sajak B.Melayu. Oleh kerana sajak itu, sajak saya sendiri, saya berani melakukannya.Lagi pun, saya sedar cara melahirkan terjemahan "tidak tunggal". Tiap-tiap baris puisi saya itu ada dua atau tiga alternatif (dalam BI)yang boleh saya gunakan.<BR/><BR/>Tentu sdr. boleh membatu. Sdr. silalah menegur kalau terjemahan saya rasa terlalu canggung. Grammar saya pun 'ala-ala kadar saja".<BR/><BR/>Sdr. your say uplifted my spirits.<BR/>I loved to dream about.<BR/><BR/>Again, thakns.ufukhatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10883978381850950194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26226837.post-1162053333246480742006-10-29T00:35:00.000+08:002006-10-29T00:35:00.000+08:00pak Darma,i enjoy your work (and the translated pi...pak Darma,<BR/><BR/>i enjoy your work (and the translated piece) as always; and a gifted translator as well.<BR/><BR/>selamat hari raya, tuan.Herohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15403434276790358516noreply@blogger.com